From 21c56fc3cf127e12dfd2a2f469d81a853ecc4a33 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Attila Lendvai <attila@lendvai.name>
Date: Mon, 28 Dec 2020 11:41:33 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] nixos/doc/manual: In the preface, add link to
 #chap-contributing

Turned the freetext suggestion about opening the build output
into a copy-pastable xdg-open line.

Renamed title to 'Contributing to this manual'.
---
 nixos/doc/manual/contributing-to-this-manual.xml | 2 +-
 nixos/doc/manual/preface.xml                     | 6 +++++-
 2 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/nixos/doc/manual/contributing-to-this-manual.xml b/nixos/doc/manual/contributing-to-this-manual.xml
index 935dd66bc141..137e04bb313b 100644
--- a/nixos/doc/manual/contributing-to-this-manual.xml
+++ b/nixos/doc/manual/contributing-to-this-manual.xml
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 <chapter xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook"
          xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink"
          xml:id="chap-contributing">
- <title>Contributing to this documentation</title>
+ <title>Contributing to this manual</title>
  <para>
   The DocBook sources of NixOS' manual are in the <filename
 xlink:href="https://github.com/NixOS/nixpkgs/tree/master/nixos/doc/manual">
diff --git a/nixos/doc/manual/preface.xml b/nixos/doc/manual/preface.xml
index 6ac9ae7e7861..0f7db6ef1a82 100644
--- a/nixos/doc/manual/preface.xml
+++ b/nixos/doc/manual/preface.xml
@@ -21,7 +21,11 @@
    xlink:href="https://discourse.nixos.org">Discourse</literal> or
   on the <link
    xlink:href="irc://irc.freenode.net/#nixos">
-  <literal>#nixos</literal> channel on Freenode</link>. Bugs should be
+  <literal>#nixos</literal> channel on Freenode</link>, or
+  consider
+  <link
+   xlink:href="#chap-contributing">
+   contributing to this manual</link>. Bugs should be
   reported in
   <link
    xlink:href="https://github.com/NixOS/nixpkgs/issues">NixOS’